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Step one.
Fall in love.
Fall down the deep dark hole,
What a rush.

Step two.
Be in love
Still falling, hoping there's no floor,
No end.

Step three.
Hit the ground.
Send your heart to the slaughter and
Ultimate pain.

Why should I blame you?
You didn't push me in.
I jumped in.

The fall was fun while it lasted.
©2005-2009 ~bipolar-boy
:iconbipolar-boy:

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Written 06/06/05

Deep inside a secret's burning
Should have known all the while what's true
I went along to fool myself
Can't go on, I can't escape it.

All along
I think I really knew
It was there in the words unspoken.
All along
Still believed in you
Now I stand here betrayed and broken.

Close my eyes from the burning
All along all the while it's true
Take it on or turn your back
Either way you can't escape it

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:iconentwined-forever:
Amazing...i love the picture this paints in your mind while reading it. Fave!

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I am censored.

:star: :star: :star: :star:
:iconinsane-chaotician:
now that is a piece of work. nice job.

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The console is a conduit for the soul.
The controller is your gateway.
Live thru it. Feel thru it.
You must be one with your game pad.
The only way to destory your opponent is to pour you very life and soul into it.
If you do not, you be R0X0R3D
:iconwierdohannah:
wow! this is sooo good!

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Why don't you all just fade away?
Talkin' bout my generation
And don't try to dig what we all say
Talkin' bout my generation
I'm not trying to cause a big sensation
Talkin' bout my generation
I'm just talkin' bout my generation
:iconeverythinglost13:
That was great! I'm bipolar, too, so I know exactly what this poem means to me, at least. It is a real work of art
:iconviewtifuldp:
lol really good ending ;)

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David And Jarvie Against The World!!!!!!!
.......................:mib:.........................

:viewtifuldp: :bipolar-boy:

Click me!!! *shakes fist*
:iconbipolar-boy:
Thanxies :) :glomp:

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I'm disillusioned & let down. 'Cause all my hero's are junkies now.
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May you go marching in three measure time. Dressed up as asses, drunk to the nines.
:iconbipolar-boy:
Thanks

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I'm disillusioned & let down. 'Cause all my hero's are junkies now.
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May you go marching in three measure time. Dressed up as asses, drunk to the nines.
:iconbipolar-boy:
Thanks :glomp:

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I'm disillusioned & let down. 'Cause all my hero's are junkies now.
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May you go marching in three measure time. Dressed up as asses, drunk to the nines.
:iconbipolar-boy:
Thanks man. Just stick in there and keep on truckin.

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I'm disillusioned & let down. 'Cause all my hero's are junkies now.
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May you go marching in three measure time. Dressed up as asses, drunk to the nines.

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